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[ Pdf Chosen (Vampire Legends, #4) ↠´ evangelism PDF ] by Emma Knight é Oh my god how horribleOh my god how horribleI have read this far in the series hoping to find some sort of redemption I have been sorely disappointed the plot is terrible and poorly developed The writing is inconsistent The only redeeming quality to the series is that the books are short and can be read in a few hours I hate giving anyone a poor review, and always try to overlook poor grammar, but can not over look poor writing. I felt this book was written better than the previous books in the series The editorial errors and mismatched details did persist however they weren t as drastic as the previous books in the series In fact I found this Chosen to be entertaining Rachel s quest to find the Red Amulet was presented in an intriguing way There were a few things that didn t quite fit in place and couldn t be left unnoticeable. 1 How did Benji get his neck cut in the first place and survive a whole year in an unconscious state near the cliff Even if the blood was oozing out at a slow rate, how on earth did the two survive under the cliff or where ever they were without being hit by the rays of the sun2 Matilda was aware of where Rachel was headed Why didn t anyone go out looki In CHOSEN Book Of The Vampire Legends , Rachel Wood Wakes After Having Just Taken The Leap Of Faith With Benji With The Blue Tablet She Searches For Him, Amazed She Is Still Alive, Only To Find That He Did Not Fare As Well He Is Mortally Injured And With Only Days Left To Live, He Needs Her Help To Survive He Needs Her To Find The Ancient Red Amulet, The Only Element Known To Be Able To Heal A VampireRachel Embarks On A Journey To Save Her Love A Journey Which Will Take Her Deep Into The Heart Of The Gravest Danger She Will Have To Confront Rival Covens, And To Search Far And Wide As She Follows The Trail Of Clues It Leads Her To Hunter, To Benji S Parents, Who Still Live In An Ancient Castle In Maine, On A Remote Island And It Leads Her Back Home, To Her Family And Friends, Who She Will Have To Confront Once Again Her Journeys Take Her Into The Heart Of Fraternity Parties, And Of Old Houses With Hidden Secrets And Ancient booksIn The Meantime, Rob Is Now A Fully Turned Vampire And He Has Never Given Up His Feelings For Rachel In Fact, As A Vampire, They Are Even Intense He Will Stop At Nothing Until He Finds Her And Has Her Again Along The Way, He Will Leave A Trail Of Devastation, Out Of Control With His Newfound Vampire Powers And His Lust To Feed He Will Confront Arielle, Rachel S Brother Marc, And Even Track Down Her Sister Sarah At Her Dorm Room In Syracuse He Will Stop At Nothing To Find RachelBut Rachel Is On An Urgent Mission Herself, To Save Benji, And It May Be Too Late When Her Mission Finally Ends, She Will Be Left With A Choice, One That Will Force Her To Choose If She Will Make The Greatest Sacrifice Of Her Life Is She Willing To Give Up Her Life To Save Her One And Only True Love How Much Is She Willing To Sacrifice CHOSEN Is Book Of The Vampire Legends Series Following SWORN, TAKEN And BITTEN , And Is Also A Standalone Novel Should be proofreadIt is disappointing to attempt to read a novel that is filled with all types of errors from typographic to spelling, grammar, and punctuation A writer should never rely on spell check or grammar check These programs are not as accurate or reliable as one might think they should be Nothing can take the place of an educated, intelligent, highly skilled proof reader If one takes pride in his her work, one would see the value of employing a proof reader I could never recommend this author When my teenage grandchildren repeatedly, page after page, comment on errors, it s pretty bad. Emma, I love your covers the artwork is well done The storyline was sorta ok, but you really need to find someone who can edit your work for you There were so many mistakes in the story that I felt that you must be a teenager writing these books. Even still, someone out there should really assist you to make these books a lot better I gave you a poor review because you also don t read up on your previous work You make mistakes that mess up the storyline For example you have the main character always lock her diary and she wears the key around her neck End of book one her family finds her diary and breaks it open and finds out about her seeing a vampire. In book two you twist it all around like the family has never opened the diary and her sister hid it for her return, and it is still sealed Then later you say her sister read her diary. Ok, I suggest you re read all your books Chosen by Emma Knight is part of a series This is a complete story in itself You can pick up the story line easily Benji and Rachel are a couple of vampires in love with each other Rachel wakes up in a cave without Benji She searches for him and finds him severely injured with blood coming from his neck He wakes up briefly and tells her the red amulet She takes to the sky to find Uncle Drew Uncle Drew tells her great grandfather had it last No one knows where it is now Grandfather doesn t talk to anyone in the family except perhaps to Hunter, Benji s brother She flies off to coollrge where Hunter is enrolled Meanwhile, Rachel s ex boyfriend Rob is looking for her She disappeared the year before when she was changed He s a vampire now too He goes around wantonly changing people to satisfy his thirst He s so much You know when you step out of a movie and then go back in and ask your companion what happened and they give you a very brief rundown so you know the basic plot points, but have lots of unanswered questions That is how I feel when I read this series Emma Knight touches on the plot points but the back story is non existent. I can t find out anything about this author but the I read of her books, the I am convinced that she is in high school Her parents reactions to Rachel s shenanigans are not very realistic They are like reactions from people who have no real world experience Someone without the viewpoint of a parent I would actually rate this book with stars if I knew for sure they were in high school, I could make allowances for that This story is full of holes and unanswered questions I can be patient but this is the fourth book I can only be patient for so long
On the plus side, this book feels like Emma s getting a little better at making sure her story flows if you ignore weird comma placements that throw a reader There s still plenty of problems in need of an editor or reader feedback, but it made me hopeful for later books if there was a slight improvement. This book starts to bring in Mark s perspectiveor should I say Marc That drove me absolutely insane, the change in spelling And what was worse, it was a clear find replace in whatever word editor was used Know how I know You see reMarced multiple times Also, a new vampire ability is introduced here spraying Narly potion at enemies from the neck like Spiderman sprays webs from his wrists I think she meant to use gnarly inst I thought this was a good book took me awhile to finish because I was listening to books on audible but this book was good couldn t put it down once I started it and Rob is crazy like wow and situation with Rachel siblings hmm i m not gone give it away but wow things going to crazy in part 4 I know it. Rather childishly written.